This is an excerpt from my unpublished manuscript 'Deathhawk's Betrayal'.
He was armed and she wasn’t. It didn’t matter. Attacking with hands and feet, she forced him backwards with a flurry of blows. Rage drove her onwards, wringing unexpected strength and speed from her. Danek backed into the sitting room. Lost in the whirlwind of fury and need for his blood, Astarl pushed after him.
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19 comments:
Awesome six, Raging driving..I'm totally involved. Great job.
Welcome to the six! Nice action.
Glad you joined in on the six! Can't wait to see more.
Nice action and nice 6, Ciara. Welcome to the fold.
An excellent excerpt, Ciara! And, might I add, I love the little dragon avatar. :)
Wow... lots of urgency here. I like the amount of action that you've paced into these 6 sentences! Great Six... welcome to the fun!
Amy Durham
would love to read more! :)
Wow! That's an amazing snippet! Welcome to Six Sentence Sunday.
Welcome to SSS, Ciara! You posted a great six, I love the action.
Got to love a woman who can yoop a man-demon or not. Welcome
Great action. Enjoyed the scene. Welcome to Six Sunday.
Strong action. Well done!
Great action. Very vivid. Welcome to Six Sentence Sunday.
Cute baby dragon!
Hey Ciara, sorry I made you cry, okay no I'm not sorry, that's why I wrote out that story, rather similar to the way my novels are. :( Bring the kleenex.
Cutest dragon ever! Makes me want one more than I want a wombat.
Ha, when you have that effect on someone you know you've succeeded
Um, not sure the dragon will be any easier than the wombat. Plus, if I find a dragon like this, I WILL fight you for him.
Oh, she's not a demon, though I can see this snippet can create that impression! No, the need for blood is something all together different.
Awesome, that's what I want to hear! ;-)
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