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Sunday 9 October 2011

Six Sentence Sunday

This is my first week participating in Six Sentence Sunday. I saw it last week and felt inspired to do it.

This is an excerpt from my unpublished manuscript 'Deathhawk's Betrayal'.

He was armed and she wasn’t. It didn’t matter. Attacking with hands and feet, she forced him backwards with a flurry of blows. Rage drove her onwards, wringing unexpected strength and speed from her. Danek backed into the sitting room. Lost in the whirlwind of fury and need for his blood, Astarl pushed after him.

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19 comments:

Alix Cameron said...

Awesome six, Raging driving..I'm totally involved. Great job.

Carrie Ann Ryan said...

Welcome to the six! Nice action.

Krystal Wade said...

Glad you joined in on the six!  Can't wait to see more.

Cara Michaels said...

Nice action and nice 6, Ciara. Welcome to the fold.

Raine Thomas said...

An excellent excerpt, Ciara! And, might I add, I love the little dragon avatar. :)

Amy Durham said...

Wow... lots of urgency here.  I like the amount of action that you've paced into these 6 sentences!  Great Six... welcome to the fun!

Amy Durham

Connie Chyle said...

would love to read more! :)

Dee Carney said...

Wow! That's an amazing snippet! Welcome to Six Sentence Sunday.

Sandra Bunino said...

Welcome to SSS, Ciara! You posted a great six, I love the action.

Lindsay Downs said...

Got to love a woman who can yoop a man-demon or not. Welcome

Cara Bristol said...

Great action. Enjoyed  the scene. Welcome to Six Sunday.

Sigrid Harris said...

Strong action. Well done!

Taryn Kincaid said...

Great action. Very vivid. Welcome to Six Sentence Sunday.

Cute baby dragon!

Rhiannon Paille said...

Hey Ciara, sorry I made you cry, okay no I'm not sorry, that's why I wrote out that story, rather similar to the way my novels are. :( Bring the kleenex. 

Erica Lucke Dean said...

Cutest dragon ever!  Makes me want one more than I want a wombat.

Ciara Ballintyne said...

Ha, when you have that effect on someone you know you've succeeded

Ciara Ballintyne said...

Um, not sure the dragon will be any easier than the wombat. Plus, if I find a dragon like this, I WILL fight you for him.

Ciara Ballintyne said...

Oh, she's not a demon, though I can see this snippet can create that impression! No, the need for blood is something all together different.

Ciara Ballintyne said...

Awesome, that's what I want to hear! ;-)

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