Lyram plunged into the melee. It was a nightmare of screaming and flashing blades, reeking of blood and smoke. Something too soft to be cobbles gave under his foot. Pushing on, he cut the next man down with a brutal slash.The faltering defence rallied in his wake. Soldiers pushed forward, closed ranks, forcing the mass of enemy soldiers back.
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7 comments:
I just love your voice. It is so intense that even six sentences gets me excited. And correct me if I'm wrong, but that IS a dragon in the picture, right? I know that because it has front legs. :)
Wow, a real action-packed six! Great!
Thanks, Kelly, and yes, that is a dragon. Well-spotted! ;-)
Love your six and so happy to see you still playing. Any news on the contest?
Lots of action... really grabs the reader's interest! Love the vivid descriptions!
Amy Durham
I liked your description; it really brought me into the moment of his charge through the melee. Well done six, Ciara. :)
Thanks Krystal. The contest results are announced November 30 so I still have a month to wait :-(
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