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Sunday 6 November 2011

Six Sentence Sunday #4

Another excerpt from 'In the Company of the Dead'.
Defenders fought to reclaim the walls. A man screamed as he went over the parapet. Further down, Ellieva scattered attackers, plunging reckless into their midst. She broke the onslaught alone, silver sword flashing red with each stroke. Her black robes billowed like crow’s wings. The men following chanted her name.

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9 comments:

Stephanie Adkins said...

Love the six, Claire! It’s great reading you! Hope you have a fantastic Sunday!

Stephanie Adkins said...

OOPS! I meant 'Ciara". Sorry about that! I need more sleep. LOL

Siobhan Muir said...

I loved the images you offered with "silver sword flashing red" and "her black robes billowing like crow's wings". Nicely done six, Ciara! :)

Vivien Dean said...

I love the use of color in your descriptions. Thanks for sharing

Kenra Daniels said...

Very nice Six! I love battle scenes.

Kelly Dines said...

A great battle scene and six! Thanks for sharing.

Alix Cameron said...

Awesome six!

nancy777ca said...

Awesome six!

Amy Durham said...

Really nice six.  Very descriptive.  Well done!

Amy Durham

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