From Deathhawk’s Betrayal:
Gavalon forced her teeth apart; the funnel invaded her mouth. Astarl choked on the sudden gush of liquid, coughed, and swallowed reflexively. Feebly, she sprayed out half a mouthful, then choked on a fresh flood. She thrashed again, redoubling her efforts.Her elbow connected. Gavalon grunted, his grip easing for a moment.
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20 comments:
Very intense six! I was relieved when her "elbow connected"!
Amy Durham
Oh, dear. Why is she being tortured?
Ooh. Freaky six!
Jeez this is scary!! I hope she gets out of this soon!
Well written struggle; I could visualize it. :-) Nice six.
Very vivid. Great six.
That is a great scene. Very clearly written I could really picture what was going on. Astarl isn't going to take that kind of abuse without a fight. Great six.
Creepy and vivid. Excellent six!
Oh no. That sounds horrible! Great six. :)
Thanks :-) We must all do terrible things to our characters!
Excellent, I was aiming for vivid
Oh yes, you've got a handle on the character, Goran!
Thank you
Thanks, always good to know the reader can see the scene
Maybe I'll post the next six next week :-)
Thanks, Krystal!
An excellent question...
Excellent, you're invested! Don't get too comfy though...
I agree with Amy. very intense six. I'm also going to have a little time to read your short story this week. It's been crazy lately. I miss not having a job sometimes. Sad, I know.
Thanks Amberr. Appreciate all your time. As you know, I'm on holidays anyway and even now I don't have enough time for everything so I commiserate!
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