The last excerpt I’ll be sharing from ‘Better Left Unspoken’.
I finished revisions on the second draft this week, but it’s still very rough
and in need of a serious edit. I’ll be letting it sit a few days while I finish
‘Air Ship, Ghost Ship’.
By the time they fought through, the invaders all dead, fled or captured, Vrims was gone.King Lynan seized Berkh’s shoulder. ‘You have to find him!’Berkh slapped his hand away. Lynan looked old beyond his years, aged by the events of a single morning. Berkh’s anger flickered and died as he stared into his brother’s grey face, his tired blue eyes.
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9 comments:
Quite a battle evidently, liked the feeling between the brothers - excellent excerpt!
Thanks, there's a bit of tension there.
So much detail in only six sentences...Wow, I have gained so much insight from your blog. Thank you.
Thank you :-) I am flattered
I'm very curious to know what's happened and what comes next. Who is Lynan so desperate to find? Great snippet.
Quite a battle evidently, liked the feeling between the brothers - excellent excerpt!
Ah, in this case that's only a secret because the snippet is so short. In context, it's evident, because his son has just been kidnapped right in front of his eyes. That's not the big secret ;-)
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