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Tuesday, 8 July 2014

Sub-Titling A Regular Feature (or The Great Scotland Problem)

Never, ever comment on the title of a blog post without having read the full blog post. You run the risk of looking like an idiot if the blog isn't at all what you thought it was, or you make an erroneous assumption. 

How does this relate to sub-titles, you might ask?

If you run a regular feature on your blog, it makes sense to 'sub-title' those blogs so it's readily apparent it belongs to that feature. It may not always be clear from a main title that a post fits within a regular feature, so this acts as an immediate flag. 

Of course, on blogs you can't actually use a 'sub-title' as they don't have that functionality, and even if they did, the distinction would be lost on Twitter anyway. So I signify a sub-title by writing the main title first, then the sub-title after a colon. I have a number of these, including my medieval weapons series and my touring Scotland series. 


The Great Scotland Problem



Just to be clear - Yes, London is still where I
always thought it was in relation to Scotland
My 'touring Scotland' feature is a series of posts about planning for my trip to Scotland. Of course, I don't live in Scotland, so there is some necessary and incidental travel to get there - about 5 days or so, probably, of a 6-7 week round trip. I dearly wish I had a teleporter so I could instantly step from my living room to Scotland, but alas, I have misplaced it.


Now all the posts in the series are sub-titled 'Touring Scotland with Ciara Ballintyne' - including those incidental travelling posts in which I'm not actually in Scotland yet. Some of the early posts had titles where it was more readily apparent we were travelling, but I found I couldn't keep doing that because the titles not only became repetitive but unwieldy if they were to give any sense of what the post itself was about.

And someone took exception to this and assumed that I was stating that London is in Scotland because of the use of the sub-title. Sure, it may not be readily apparent from the title how it works, but reading the post would quickly clear this up. Many of us know from reading the news that the headline is not the whole story - if it were, why would we read it? It behooves us to be informed before we pass judgement. 

Eilean Donan Castle - in Scotland
Instead, I was essentially called an idiot for believing that London is in Scotland - when that's not what I said - and continued to be told I thought London was in Scotland when in fact I do not and never have thought that and even explained why the post was titled the way it is. It would have sufficed for the commenter to state that she didn't agree with my analysis rather than to continue misrepresenting and belittling me. Instead, she has taken the view that there is some 'error' in my post title. 

The only error is in the inference drawn, and as anyone who writes knows, there will always be someone who misinterprets it. If I called the series 'Touring Britain', someone would later complain that I spent too much time on Scotland. You might also complain if I had a post titled 'Sydney Airport: Touring Scotland with Ciara Ballintyne', but this is also a post that legitimately relates to my trip.

I have no issue with someone bringing a misinterpretation to my attention. I won't necessarily agree, but I'm open to a rational discussion and swapping of explanations. However, over 24 hours this situation quickly deteriorated into a series of snide and cruel jokes at my expense for something I never said at a level that can only be called bullying. 

At the end of it (or possibly in the middle of it, but I am resolved not to reply any further), I sat down and re-assessed my reasons for using the sub-title - and I still think they are sound. 

So here's why I chose to sub-title 'Touring Scotland' even on posts where I had not yet arrived in Scotland.


London is On The Way to Scotland For Most of the World


For six billion nine hundred and thirty million people, London is the gateway to Britain. For most, it's not only the gateway, but literally on the way to Scotland. While Glasgow is an international airport, relatively few flights go there directly without a layover at London. From Australia, you can only fly to Glasgow without a layover at London if you fly Emirates - and then it's a 39 hour flight! No thank you...

If you layover at London, you will disembark an international flight and board a domestic flight. This means you must clear immigration and then pass back through security for the domestic flight - it's a major pain in the rear, especially if your first flight runs late - they won't hold that plane for you! It's even more an issue if you have kids in tow and have been travelling for 24 hours already from somewhere like, say, Australia. The alternative, of course, is to stop in London for a few days of sight-seeing. 

So, it seems reasonable that most people would understand that a post title including the words 'London' and 'Scotland' is probably referring to travel on the way to Scotland - since for 99.1% of the population, they will nearly always travel to Scotland via London.


You Were In London and Didn't See It?


London - NOT in Scotland, but relatively close by compared 
to that part of the world OUTSIDE Britain
(i.e. most of the world).
I did this on my first trip. I flew into London twice and out once. I even drove in and out of London. But we didn't stop. And I still remember the aghast looks I received from people. 

Apparently it is inconceivable to be anywhere in the vicinity of London and not see it and its sights. I kind of understand this, although for me I like Scotland a lot more. But since I encountered this attitude so much last time, I figured I would stop this time to see what the fuss was about.

Also, I figured that given the prevalence of this attitude, it would be readily understandable that I would stop in London on my way to Scotland. 

I still think these are valid reasons to sub-title the post that way, even if one particular person took a different inference from the title - an inference that would have been resolved quickly if she'd just read the blog post, instead of relentlessly misrepresenting me on a public forum. To continue stating that I said London is in Scotland, when I never said that at all, and after I have explained why the post is titled the way it is, just makes you look like a bully and an idiot. By all means, disagree with my reasoning - but don't misrepresent me.

In any case, it's now redundant as in the next post in the series we will be leaving London and on our way for Scotland. 

Side note: Be careful of misrepresenting people. You can actually defame someone by doing this. It's not really my thing, but if you did it to the wrong person, or in the wrong circumstances, you could find yourself on the wrong end of a lawsuit

Monday, 7 July 2014

Monday Morsel: The Hand of Ladanyon - An Excerpt from Stalking the Demon


Welcome to the Monday Morsel feature. The second draft of Stalking the Demon is finished, and by god it was a painful experience! Of the first 15,000 words in the second draft, 3500 came from the first draft, 7500 were deleted, and 10,500 new words were written. What a mess I made! Fortunately the last quarter was a pleasant surprise, and the climax of the sequel is just as, or more, action-packed than Confronting the Demon.

The second draft now clocks in at 27,000 words, and I’ll be doing a read-through and tidy up before sending it off to beta readers.

For now, enjoy another excerpt!

* * *

It wasn’t what he’d come for, and he swept it aside with his left arm and reached in for a wooden box resting against the rear wall. He flipped the hinged lid open, revealing a collection of more than twenty small bones of varying shapes and sizes.

It had taken some doing, but he’d found the hand in the wreckage of the square after he’d been released from the hospice. If Gisayne had lost hers, it stood to reason that Ladanyon might have as well, since the three of them had been knotted together by the tangle of enchantments.


I should destroy it.


These bones of Ladanyon’s might be affecting Gisayne’s malady. If the link between them did remain, and there was some kind of conduit into the hell, the presence of part of Ladanyon on this plane might be amplifying the effect of the link. If he destroyed the bones, Gisayne might get better.


A chance, but no certainty. And if Ladanyon was alive, and the ways into hell were not closed, these bones might be needed more than ever. A part of a wizard was a powerful weapon against him. Just look at all the trouble he’d had to go to last time.


He couldn’t do it.



Thanks for dropping by! Don't forget, this is the second draft, and as such won't be perfect. If you like what you read, and are so inclined, show your support by leaving a comment. Stalking the Demon is expected to be released in August. If you'd like to sample more of my writing, check out the free short stories available on this site.

If this is your first visit to Monday Morsels, find others in the series by clicking on the ‘Monday morsel’ tag, or go to the first installment for Stalking the Demon.

More about Stalking the Demon:


Alloran did everything within his power; he banished the demon and sealed the portal. But the world is still careening into hell.


Six months after Ladanyon's defeat, Gisayne is fading away from a baffling illness. Alloran is desperate for a cure, but he has a secret - the fabric of reality is collapsing, threatening to spill unrestrained demons into the world of Verusia. Is Ladanyon striking back at Alloran from the hell to which he was condemned, or is there a traitor among them?


The only people he can turn to for help deciphering the linked mysteries of Gisayne's affliction and the collapse of the world are the two research assistants set to spy on him for the council of wizards - but he knows he can't trust them.


Everything Alloran loves races toward destruction - and all the answers are locked away in hell.


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Friday, 4 July 2014

Madame Tussauds, St Paul’s Cathedral, Big Ben and the London Eye: Touring Scotland with Ciara Ballintyne


It must be our second day in London by now. We’re leaving for York on a train around 2pm, so until then we’ll be squeezing in a few more sightseeing experiences.

Madame Tussauds


I’m undecided about this. We have one in Sydney now, although I haven’t been, and I’m still considering whether the original London wax museum really offers anything over and above the Sydney one. I’ll have to do more research. If you have an opinion, chime in!


St Paul’s Cathedral


We saw a few cathedrals in Rome, but St Paul’s seems to be offering a few features not available anywhere we’ve been previously! 


Climb the dome – you can climb up the dome to the Whispering Gallery, where a whisper can be heard clearly 100 feet away. Perhaps not the best location for clandestine meetings. A mere 271 steps will take you up to the Golden Gallery and views across London.

The crypt – once you’ve gone all the way to the top you can go down to the bottom, where lies the cathedral’s architect Sir Christopher Wren together with Admiral Lord Nelson and the Duke of Wellington in the cathedral's crypts.


The cathedral also offers a touchscreen tour and an immersive film experience. Feeling peckish? You can eat at ‘The Restaurant at St Paul’s’.


The London Eye


This one’s probably considered totally touristy, but this was hubby’s pick and I can’t have it all my way. I concede you do get an excellent view across London, and since we’re not going to be in town long, this probably isn’t a bad idea.


Big Ben


When I think of Big Ben, I always think of the clock tower, and although the name is apparently applied to the tower, the clock and the bell, it properly only refers to the Great Bell.


It was also news to me to learn that the clock tower is actually attached to the UK houses of Parliament. Why didn't I know this? It seems like something I should have known.


The tower in question is the Elizabeth Tower, and stands at the north end of the Houses of Parliament. You can tour the clock tower, but I'm unsure if we'll want to go that far or just see it - it may well end up being a question of time. What do you think?


Fun fact: Big Ben first tolled on 11 July 1859.


About Touring Scotland with Ciara Ballintyne


Ciara Ballintyne is visiting Scotland in 2016 - join her on a virtual tour of Scotland and other parts of Great Britain as she plans her trip. Where do you think she should visit?


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