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Sunday, 6 November 2011

Six Sentence Sunday #4

Another excerpt from 'In the Company of the Dead'.
Defenders fought to reclaim the walls. A man screamed as he went over the parapet. Further down, Ellieva scattered attackers, plunging reckless into their midst. She broke the onslaught alone, silver sword flashing red with each stroke. Her black robes billowed like crow’s wings. The men following chanted her name.

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9 comments:

  1. Stephanie Adkins7 November 2011 at 01:40

    Love the six, Claire! It’s great reading you! Hope you have a fantastic Sunday!

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  2. Stephanie Adkins7 November 2011 at 01:42

    OOPS! I meant 'Ciara". Sorry about that! I need more sleep. LOL

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  3. Siobhan Muir7 November 2011 at 04:50

    I loved the images you offered with "silver sword flashing red" and "her black robes billowing like crow's wings". Nicely done six, Ciara! :)

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  4. Vivien Dean7 November 2011 at 06:40

    I love the use of color in your descriptions. Thanks for sharing

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  5. Kenra Daniels7 November 2011 at 09:29

    Very nice Six! I love battle scenes.

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  6. Kelly Dines7 November 2011 at 10:11

    A great battle scene and six! Thanks for sharing.

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  7. Alix Cameron7 November 2011 at 10:29

    Awesome six!

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  8. nancy777ca10 November 2011 at 12:48

    Awesome six!

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  9. Amy Durham14 November 2011 at 08:41

    Really nice six.  Very descriptive.  Well done!

    Amy Durham

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