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Sunday, 9 October 2011

Six Sentence Sunday

This is my first week participating in Six Sentence Sunday. I saw it last week and felt inspired to do it.

This is an excerpt from my unpublished manuscript 'Deathhawk's Betrayal'.

He was armed and she wasn’t. It didn’t matter. Attacking with hands and feet, she forced him backwards with a flurry of blows. Rage drove her onwards, wringing unexpected strength and speed from her. Danek backed into the sitting room. Lost in the whirlwind of fury and need for his blood, Astarl pushed after him.

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19 comments:

  1. Alix Cameron9 October 2011 at 11:15

    Awesome six, Raging driving..I'm totally involved. Great job.

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  2. Carrie Ann Ryan9 October 2011 at 11:45

    Welcome to the six! Nice action.

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  3. Krystal Wade9 October 2011 at 12:03

    Glad you joined in on the six!  Can't wait to see more.

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  4. Cara Michaels9 October 2011 at 12:53

    Nice action and nice 6, Ciara. Welcome to the fold.

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  5. Raine Thomas9 October 2011 at 13:17

    An excellent excerpt, Ciara! And, might I add, I love the little dragon avatar. :)

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  6. Amy Durham9 October 2011 at 23:34

    Wow... lots of urgency here.  I like the amount of action that you've paced into these 6 sentences!  Great Six... welcome to the fun!

    Amy Durham

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  7. Connie Chyle10 October 2011 at 00:31

    would love to read more! :)

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  8. Dee Carney10 October 2011 at 02:12

    Wow! That's an amazing snippet! Welcome to Six Sentence Sunday.

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  9. Sandra Bunino10 October 2011 at 03:42

    Welcome to SSS, Ciara! You posted a great six, I love the action.

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  10. Lindsay Downs10 October 2011 at 05:30

    Got to love a woman who can yoop a man-demon or not. Welcome

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  11. Cara Bristol10 October 2011 at 07:11

    Great action. Enjoyed  the scene. Welcome to Six Sunday.

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  12. Sigrid Harris10 October 2011 at 12:45

    Strong action. Well done!

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  13. Taryn Kincaid10 October 2011 at 14:20

    Great action. Very vivid. Welcome to Six Sentence Sunday.

    Cute baby dragon!

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  14. Rhiannon Paille12 October 2011 at 00:30

    Hey Ciara, sorry I made you cry, okay no I'm not sorry, that's why I wrote out that story, rather similar to the way my novels are. :( Bring the kleenex. 

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  15. Erica Lucke Dean12 October 2011 at 07:35

    Cutest dragon ever!  Makes me want one more than I want a wombat.

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  16. Ciara Ballintyne16 October 2011 at 22:07

    Ha, when you have that effect on someone you know you've succeeded

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  17. Ciara Ballintyne16 October 2011 at 22:08

    Um, not sure the dragon will be any easier than the wombat. Plus, if I find a dragon like this, I WILL fight you for him.

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  18. Ciara Ballintyne16 October 2011 at 22:09

    Oh, she's not a demon, though I can see this snippet can create that impression! No, the need for blood is something all together different.

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  19. Ciara Ballintyne16 October 2011 at 22:09

    Awesome, that's what I want to hear! ;-)

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