tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1930320015749694781.post8171265550978290716..comments2023-12-26T04:58:04.337+11:00Comments on Flight of the Dragon: Six Sentence Sunday: SlangAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/18436989031700445050noreply@blogger.comBlogger19125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1930320015749694781.post-20721242167089721562011-12-12T10:45:40.740+11:002011-12-12T10:45:40.740+11:00Oh yes, Berhk definitely needs a handbook!Oh yes, Berhk definitely needs a handbook!Ciara Ballintynehttp://ciaraballintyne.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1930320015749694781.post-68159532292263166472011-12-12T10:45:16.859+11:002011-12-12T10:45:16.859+11:00Glad to hear it, thanks for commenting.Glad to hear it, thanks for commenting.Ciara Ballintynehttp://ciaraballintyne.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1930320015749694781.post-45377122184775849782011-12-12T03:46:54.595+11:002011-12-12T03:46:54.595+11:00I have a funny feeling that a dictionary of local ...I have a funny feeling that a dictionary of local idioms might come in handy here... I suspect that there's more at risk than getting grubby. You build the suspense without being obvious about it.E. P. Beaumontnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1930320015749694781.post-62986968149453751882011-12-11T10:13:07.180+11:002011-12-11T10:13:07.180+11:00Nice six. Very descriptive. Made me want to keep r...Nice six. Very descriptive. Made me want to keep reading.Heather Bnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1930320015749694781.post-45797132351678657002011-12-06T10:35:42.753+11:002011-12-06T10:35:42.753+11:00They're too 'neat'. Obviously orchestr...They're too 'neat'. Obviously orchestrated, if you will - an obvious effort to blend in, which therefore fails.Ciara Ballintynehttp://ciaraballintyne.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1930320015749694781.post-75713573080792288352011-12-06T10:34:44.705+11:002011-12-06T10:34:44.705+11:00I had simply never thought about it until I did th...I had simply never thought about it until I did the workshop on worldbuilding. And when you consciously think about it, it's HARD.Ciara Ballintynehttp://ciaraballintyne.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1930320015749694781.post-90339758825049146022011-12-06T03:18:18.888+11:002011-12-06T03:18:18.888+11:00I'm intrigued. Apparently, his clothes are goi...I'm intrigued. Apparently, his clothes are going to get him into trouble no matter what--whether they are too fine or not fine enough.Sherry Robertshttp://twitter.com/SherryRoberts7noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1930320015749694781.post-91457749678027709252011-12-06T02:35:21.610+11:002011-12-06T02:35:21.610+11:00I'm not the best writer in the world, so using...I'm not the best writer in the world, so using slang in anything was never easy for me. But I'm working on it!Jennyhttp://oh.so-very.menoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1930320015749694781.post-62638568440481175512011-12-05T13:09:27.043+11:002011-12-05T13:09:27.043+11:00Oh good cause I'm always picky about the six I...Oh good cause I'm always picky about the six I choose. Glad to know it's paying off!Ciara Ballintynehttp://ciaraballintyne.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1930320015749694781.post-54120084298191519952011-12-05T13:09:07.843+11:002011-12-05T13:09:07.843+11:00Definitely, I'll be doing a post this week on ...Definitely, I'll be doing a post this week on worldbuilding as a tie-in. Thanks for stopping by!Ciara Ballintynehttp://ciaraballintyne.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1930320015749694781.post-50201417261663539592011-12-05T12:56:42.155+11:002011-12-05T12:56:42.155+11:00I love your six. It leaves me wanting more, and th...I love your six. It leaves me wanting more, and that is always good. Also stumbled the post. Hope you had a great weekend!Amberr Meadowshttp://www.amberrisme.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1930320015749694781.post-19451075491122692922011-12-05T12:20:32.552+11:002011-12-05T12:20:32.552+11:00Such a good point about worldbuilding, especially ...Such a good point about worldbuilding, especially in SF and fantasy. I love Berkh's confusion. Great six!cate peacehttp://twitter.com/lexcadenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1930320015749694781.post-3967971354474740492011-12-05T10:45:34.390+11:002011-12-05T10:45:34.390+11:00Thank you :-)Thank you :-)Ciara Ballintynehttp://ciaraballintyne.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1930320015749694781.post-82690975198943805392011-12-05T10:23:16.401+11:002011-12-05T10:23:16.401+11:00Nicely descriptive and a good capture of his confu...Nicely descriptive and a good capture of his confusion. :)<br /> <br />~Xakara<a href="http://xakara.livejournal.com/117751.html" rel="nofollow">A Way To A Dragon's Heart 6SS</a>Xakara Authornoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1930320015749694781.post-18382963438361988852011-12-05T09:40:50.445+11:002011-12-05T09:40:50.445+11:00Don't miss next week when she explains it to h...Don't miss next week when she explains it to him! :-)Ciara Ballintynehttp://ciaraballintyne.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1930320015749694781.post-55372888098032598772011-12-05T09:40:34.143+11:002011-12-05T09:40:34.143+11:00Thanks! I really liked this snippet - hence why I&...Thanks! I really liked this snippet - hence why I'll write a story including it!Ciara Ballintynehttp://ciaraballintyne.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1930320015749694781.post-90209696065501291422011-12-05T09:29:49.744+11:002011-12-05T09:29:49.744+11:00-grins- Love his confusion over being 'smeared...-grins- Love his confusion over being 'smeared.' I know I've been confused often enough over a new slang word.Sadie Harthttp://sadiehart.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1930320015749694781.post-92051715271080956232011-12-05T08:53:20.706+11:002011-12-05T08:53:20.706+11:00Love the description of the clothes. Really tells ...Love the description of the clothes. Really tells a lot about his character!Krystal Wadenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1930320015749694781.post-23998178486690680372011-12-05T08:35:15.622+11:002011-12-05T08:35:15.622+11:00Love your six sentences!Love your six sentences!Julia Rachel Barrettnoreply@blogger.com